"Why Brown?"

College Essays
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<p>Hey, I just wrote my "Why Brown?" essay and I'd really really appreciate it if a few people could have a look at it.
English isn't my first language, so I'm always a bit scared of making awkward formulations or silly mistakes.
Of course, I'd also like to ask you to give me some feedback about the content of the essay.</p>

<p>If you're interested, please PM me. (If you want, you can also write your e-mail address and I send it to you by e-mail.)</p>

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<p>I'll proofread it (though your english seems fine to me)</p>

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<p>Brownie here-- PM me.</p>

<p>-M</p>

4

<p>i'll take a look and provide feedback</p>

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<p>I'll check it out.</p>