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Teenage curiosity and a quest for diversity led me to move to my homeland of Puerto Rico. I was anxious to immerse myself in one of the most vibrant cultures in the world. However, if I were to move to the island I would have to sacrifice my high school rowing career. My new home was missing the resources for a rowing club and my old home was missing sufficient diversity for me. Sacrificing one of my interests to save another, as I did here, will surely not be necessary at Boston University. Hence, one of the reasons I fancy attending BU so much. BU is a place where I can be rowing out of the DeWolfe boathouse in the morning and be volunteering with (HUGS) international service group by noon. Boston U proves to be exactly what i’m looking for: a platform for growth on every spectrum simultaneously. During an on campus tour, I was able to get a taste of what the student body was like. I realized that boston is inherently foreign to a majority of the students but regardless, all of the students felt a strong sense of belonging here. This environment was surprisingly cosy and I assimilated with my surroundings almost immediately. Almost all students were extremely outgoing, a vital piece to a successful BU experience. I was now left to investigate the most important part of any university, its education. Just as I thought BU couldn’t get any better I found the Questrom school of business, a hub for innovation and technology in Boston. Boston University is a melting pot full of opportunity for students. I am sure that BU and success are synonymous.