"Why Duke?" essay...

<p>Will anyone read over my Why Duke? essay. I really like it, but my college counselor thinks I should focus in on one specific thing, although I think I did (balance). </p>

<p>Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!</p>

<p>I can. If you desire me to read please PM me with it. tx</p>

<p>PM Me. Last year I read a why Duke essay. It emphasised on the aspect of its biomed engr. She was accepted!</p>

<p>i can read it for you!</p>

<p>pm it over ill read it</p>

<p>i can read it =D pm it over</p>

<p>IF you are ready for my advice.. ^^</p>