<p>AnuVX, you are getting me very angry again. So I will not be giving you anymore new ideas if you don't put me as one of your references on your essay. However, I will elaborate on my old ideas.</p>
<p>1 - Focus, Focus, Focus..... and Focus. If you are going to write about your business, then only write about your business. In fact, you should be so focused that the centre of focus in your essay is only a single event. Write about an epiphany you had on business or mgxvideos (if you write about the mgxvideo make sure you link it up real nice with business management), the moment you solved a problem, or your first debate. The key here is using one event to show one of your major personal traits/interest/philosophy. (In your case: I want business, and business whats me too) MGX video, debate, music choose ONE!</p>
<p>2 - There is NOT ENOUGH SPACE!!!!! If you can fit all your accomplishments, personal traits, interests, personal philosophy, 9/11, war on terror, tax cuts and who you support for the 2004 election all onto one page, than tell me where you live so i can crawl to your feet and burn you a lamb as offering. I think that says about everything I need to say about how there is NOT ENOUGH SPACE!!!!!!</p>
<h2>3 - Write an essay. The key to the structure of this kind of essay is to have a THESIS. THESIS = FOCUSED because THERE IS NOT ENOUGH SPACE!!!!!!!!! So write yourself a strong (strong means FOCUSED) thesis, and support it in the rest of the essay (with personal experience, logical reasoning, emotional conviction, whatever). Remember, be FOCUSED!!!!!!</h2>
<h2>"i mean should i have one paragraph about mgx video and have one about deabte and one about music and one about general business interests/managing skills or should i just make mgxvideo/businessinterests the whole theme of the essay and just talk about that, while mentioning how debate has been a factor in leading me to business because i like speaking/argumentation etc. and also how learning 3 instruments for the last 8 years shows my perseverance and determination and crap...?"</h2>
<p>AARRRRRRRRRRRR!!! I am so angry! If you are going to write one paragraph about every piece of junk in your mind, then you should apply to every junk-college in America. Instead, pick one junk out of all the junks and make it a treasure by FOCUSING on it. And WTF dude, I just wanted to cite one sentence from your post, but i had to highlight a whole f'ing paragraph. Please don't write like this in your essay.</p>
<p>AnuVX, leave me your address right now so I can drive south and biatchslap you, two times.</p>
<p>tip - if you really want to talk about every accomplishments, personal traits, interests, and personal philosophy, you have there is a little trick. It's called using a reference. For items 1 to 4 on your 1B form, add references.</p>