Will people on the floor of my dorm hall notice that I'm transgender?

Well whether or not you’re going to be identified is definitely going to be affected by your pronoun preference. If you room with a girl but ask to be referred to by male pronouns then people who know your roommate is a girl are going to know you’re transgender (unless gender neutral housing for freshman is an option on your campus or you can convince them that there was some mistake/issue and a guy was roomed with a girl). If you’re going to go back into the closet and use female pronouns (which I imagine is an awful feeling and I’m sorry that your parents aren’t more supportive) then they’ll probably just assume you’re a butch/masculine girl.

I’m honestly a little torn about whether or not you need to tell the roommate in advance. My first thought was yes because you identify as a man you should say something because the housing is intended to be for two women (especially if your school has a gender neutral option that your roommate chose not to use), but then I started thinking - what if you weren’t actually transgender, but just a really masculine girl. I understand this isn’t an accurate description of how you feel, but in terms of how you affect the roommate, how are you any different from a super butch lesbian (I’m also assuming you’re a heterosexual man), and would I say that a super butch lesbian needed to tell the roommate ahead of time? I would probably say no, you don’t need to tell your roommate ahead of time. So I guess I fall on the side of “you don’t need to tell your roommate ahead of time,” but certainly if you want your roommate to refer to you as a man you’re going to have to tell her at some point.

EDIT: Also “notice” is obviously not the same thing as “care/have a problem with.”