<p>I finished writing some of my admission essay for college but I would like an outside person to give me their opinions on the essay. Any sort of grammar, content, and style revisions are welcomed. I am not going to post my essay on this thread for obvious reasons so tell me if you are willing to check my essay and I will contact you. Thanks!!</p>
<p>I would be happy to review it, @jugger</p>
<p>I’d suggest asking either your current or a prior year’s English teacher to review it.</p>
<p>I would like to but so many kids are already asking my english teachers to review their work.</p>
<p>I will be happy to review it. </p>