Will someone please read my essay?

College Essays
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<p>I'm looking for a few people to read my essay AND give feedback.</p>

<p>The topic is a hobby I have.</p>

<p>I'll PM you my essay and its prompt. Thanks in advance!</p>

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<p>I can read it.</p>

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<p>I’d love to read it!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>i’ll read it</p>

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<p>I’ll read!</p>

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<p>I can read it if need be</p>

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<p>I wouldn’t mind reading it :)</p>

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<p>I cannot PM you back since I have to have 15 total posts to PM :frowning: </p>

<p>I will just post it here:</p>

<p>It is a very well put together essay. It flows well and gives the feeling that you are a truly gifted writer. The only criticism that I can find is the relation to computer science. Maybe things like creativity and thinking things through could be your relation to computer science. Problem solving still seems to be like an okay correlation to me, but it could be stronger. But if that is what you strongly believe, then by all means put it on your essay as that. This is you writing the essay and describing yourself, not me.</p>

<p>Overall, it is very good! I wish you luck in the admissions process! :)</p>

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<p>send it here</p>

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<p>I’ll give it a read</p>

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<p>I’d read it, just post it.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. Send it to me</p>

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<p>Yeah sure pm me</p>

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<p>Why would I post it? -_-</p>

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<p>I can read it! PM it to me!</p>

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<p>Send it over!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you need</p>

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<p>I’ll read it too!</p>

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<p>I’m willing to read it!</p>