Will someone read my essay?

<p>Hi so I've just written a rough draft of my essay and would really appreciate it if I could PM it to some of you. It is a bit personal just an fyi - thanks.</p>

<p>Also it’s written on mental illnesses and I know this is a very risky topic and colleges are beyond reluctant to accept students with these issues, but I feel my application is empty without this explanation and that I am just lying about myself. I really really need someone to tell me how risky it is and if it is, if I should rewrite it though I don’t have something I feel as passionate about as this topic.</p>

<p>Ok I actually changed my topic to something that isn’t risky but bump!!</p>

<p>I will read it if you want. You can private message me. </p>