<p>Anyone want to evaluate my essays for what their worth? I got into UCLA but paranoid about berkeley...OOS</p>
<p>Potential to contribute:
I started my own company. Out of greed, the desire the try something new and the ultimately reward of calling yourself CEO, I banded four science majors to create, market and sell an original idea. After weeks of brainstorming about robots, home cancer scans, and car alarms, our first conceivable idea was to start a campus wake-up service. We would program a home wake up service similar to the morning call that hotels had for their customers. We would charge people about a dollar today to get up and call them to wake up. The only major flaw in our plan was that there would be no one to wake up the callers. So we decided to start a tutoring software company. I had been having a lot of
trouble in Organic Chemistry so Ive been asking a lot of people to help me on instant messenger.
However, our main problem with instant messenger was that there was no way to draw diagrams. In science classes such as Organic Chemistry, reaction mechanisms and energy diagrams are crucial parts of illustrating concepts. So our company decided that we would design and create software and service that would allow live tutors to communicate with students on the internet after school hours. We would hand select peer tutors who have done well in the course and equip them with a webcam, microphone and a tablet PC. Students would be able to schedule online appointments at their own convenience, 24 hours a day and receive help almost instantly. We would charge the student on an hourly basis and our software would facilitate communication and instruction between the student and the tutor.</p>
<p>However, that is the ideal scenario. As science majors, we know nothing about the world of software and computer programming. As a biochemistry major and CEO, I had no prior experience in running a business. Neither did my Financial Officer, Marketing officer or Internet Officer. We had no source of funding or knowledge about how to obtain it. My team is constantly late and unprepared. As CEO, I realized it was my job to pull everything together. So I started contacting professors and local businessmen for mentors. I established a meeting jar, charging my team members for every meeting theyve missed or was late for. With that, we had our first source of funding. I contacted a professional programmer who helps us with development and a graphic designer to create our logo. I facebook-ed students from other campuses willing to implement our tutoring company at their local school.</p>
<p>Currently our profits stand at 0. But we have a dedicated team of students and adults willing to see our project through. Despite having no academic experience in the subject, Ive realized that business permeate every aspect of our lives and that the contacts Ive made are invaluable for the future. I learned that chances are, our business will ultimately fail. But I love taking that risk. It allows me to communicate with other people instead of sitting in a sterile lab and it gives me an opportunity to think creatively and solve every day problems. It lets me connect with the world instead of playing with organic chemistry models. Our difference in the world has yet to be foreseen but it has made me realize how much potential and control over our lives corporations have. It has given me insight into the world of business and brought real world experience into my life and will hopefully be of service to the University of California.</p>
<p>Other: (i ran out of words)
When I was a month old, my parents left me to the care of my grandparents. For the first five (and the happiest) years of my life, I was raised by two of the most wonderful people on earth. My
grandparents were successful painters and I grew up in an art studio, painting beside them. They were the first parents I ever had and, as I grew to realize, the most patient and unselfish people I would ever meet. They never raised their voices, never quibbled and never cared about things such as money. They treated everyone with the same love
and kindness and devoted their whole lives to their family and their art. To me, they represent everything genuinely good in the world.</p>
<p>Eventually, we parted ways. I moved to Chicago to be with my parents and they moved to California to be with the weather. As I grew up and worried about school, boys and fun, they grew older and worried about things such as loss of eyesight, arthritis and disease. Every time I went to see them, they grew progressively worse. Now, at 80, my grandmother is almost blind and my grandfather is unable to walk unattended. It breaks my heart to see them every time. My main reason for transferring to California is to spend time with them, and show them the same joy and kindness theyve given me.</p>