Will you read my common app essay and provide feedback? (Can do the same for you!)

<p>I have done 2 essays for my common app
One is about the death of my best friend and its impact on me
and the other one is about me coming to the US in an exchange program.</p>

<p>Can you read them and say what you think and which one is more appropriate for a common app essay? </p>

<p>If you can help, leave a comment and I will PM you
Thank you</p>

<p>bump… anyone?</p>

<p>suresend it, I’ll probably get back to you in a week, ie before next Friday</p>

<p>Send it over. I hope it’s good so i’m not wasting my time.</p>

<p>As you send it to me, provide me your email address.</p>

<p>anyone else willing to read my common app essay?</p>

<p>I’m into college already. I’ll read it.</p>

<p>Anyone else? Send me a PM with your email address so I can email it.</p>

<p>Got the final draft, anyone willing to read? Please pm and send me your email if you can read.</p>