Will you read my Yale essay?

<p>It is a very private essay and I honestly didn't want my parents reading it. I am asking for you, the intelligent people of the internet, to help me out with the editing.</p>

<p>Let me know if you will and I'll PM it to you.</p>

<p>Thank you so much!</p>

<p>Sure. I already got into a school Early Decision so I may be able to help you.</p>

<p>PM it to me! My cousin who goes to Yale said he can take a look at it :)</p>