would any accepted SFS student look over my future transfer essay?

Colleges and Universities A-Z Georgetown University
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<p>The question is: Describe the development of your interest in international affairs and how
you believe that pursuing your studies in the Edmund A. Walsh School of Foreign Service would serve your future goals.</p>

<p>I really want to get some critique on this essay so that I can make it better, to the point, etc. This is not a final version and I will develop it further based on your feedback.</p>

<p>Tell me if you could take some time and read it and I'll PM it to you.</p>

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<p>anybody ? ?</p>

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<p>bump…bump</p>

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<p>Alright, I’ll give you a read. No promises that it’ll be the most detailed critique though as I’m rather busy.</p>