would anybody like to help me revise my essay?

Applying to College
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<p>anybody willing to look at my essay and help me revise it? it would be gladly appreciated</p>

<p>i'll PM you my essay if you guys decide to read it</p>

<p>thanks</p>

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<p>I can look it over for you!</p>

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<p>sure...where are you applying?</p>

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<p>i can give you some tips</p>

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<p>sure, you can PM me and i'll read it and give my thoughts on it.</p>