I think my common app essay needs some more work but I feel like it needs a pair of fresh eyes to look at it. Would anyone be willing to read it? If you comment below I might send it to you. Thanks!
To prevent plagiarism, I suggest to you show you essay to your English teacher, no put on internet.
go to the forum with consolidated essay readers, some of the senior members are very helpful
I just started school, and things are about to get VERY busy for me. If you want to PM it to me, and can give me a day or two to get to it, I’ll be happy to take a look.
But the point the previous 2 posters are making is solid. You only want an adult, with an established posting history, to look at your essay. So, before you send it to anyone (including me!) click on their name, and check the threads they’ve started. You should see references to their students, or their teen children, or their spouses, or their careers.
I’m a high school math teacher, with 3 teenage kids. Everything you read from the past 3 or so years of my posts should verify that.