Would Anyone Care to Read My Common App Transfer Essay?

Transfer Students
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<p>Hi guys!</p>

<p>I know that it's barely August, but I've already written a rough draft of my Common App essay. I'm hoping to transfer to the University of Richmond, Lehigh University or Bentley University in the fall of 2015. </p>

<p>Please let know if my introduction paragraph doesn't match the rest of my essay or if I'm too critical of my current university. </p>

<p>Thanks so much!</p>

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<p>I would be willing to put in my two cents. :slight_smile: Just PM me.</p>

3

<p>I am willing to read it.</p>

4

<p>Bump…</p>

5

<p>Sure, I can read it, I’m working on mine now as well</p>

6

<p>I don’t think you should release your common app essay to people online. Though I cannot tell you what to do. Good luck.</p>

7

<p>^^^ Ditto. I’ve never been a fan of that especially for the common app. </p>

8

<p>I’m not letting everyone read my essay. I’m asking parents/current college students for feedback. </p>