Would anyone like to critique my College Essay?

College Essays
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<p>I appreciate any help, willing to PM it.</p>

<p>It's for Vassar EDII, NYU, RPI, BC, BU, Fordham, Marist.</p>

2

<p>Sure, PM it over.</p>

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<p>Thanks Lagrange, still looking for critics!</p>

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<p>Anyone else?</p>

5

<p>i’d like to give you my two cents. send me a pm.</p>

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<p>I feel like reading some essays. Can PM me if you still want</p>

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<p>Pm me and I’ll help to the best of my abilities.</p>