Would anyone mind reading my academic preparation UC essay?

Applying to College
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<p>I just finished it and it's a bit rough... but I don't know how ti fix it. Any help would be greatly appreciated.</p>

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<p>Ill read it.</p>

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<p>Hey thanks....could you possibly do it in within an hour?</p>

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<p>The essay is somewhat basic. It's just listing stuff that's already on your transcript. Not much is shown about you. Tell the readers more than just your enrollment in the classes.</p>

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<p>ill read too!</p>

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<p>i ll read it</p>

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<p>ill read it. even though its 209 in the morning lol.</p>

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<p>send it over</p>

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<p>ill read it also, bored and can't sleep.</p>

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<p>sure pm me i'll comment</p>