Would anyone want to critique my JHU essay?!

College Essays
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<p>Hi there,</p>

<p>just let me know if you want to see it. And be very very harsh please. </p>

<p>I am pleased with its overall turnout but I dont know what else I could write about JHU in the last paragraph.</p>

<p>I would also prefer it if someone who is not 2014 read it.</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

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<p>I’m not 2014, so I’d love to read it! PM me.</p>

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<p>Thank you so so much, I sent you the essay!</p>

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<p>2014, but I won’t be a competitor. Pretty good at being a very harsh editor. I know JHU very well considering that I basically grew up on campus. It was my top choice until I got accepted to MIT.</p>

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<p>Thank you to you too sir! I appreciate all this help.</p>

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<p>hey, i’ll read it</p>

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<p>i wil take a look. I’m not applying to JHU.</p>

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<p>thanks thanks, sorry for late reply! I sent to you all.</p>