Would someone please critique my "How will you engage academically at UPENN" essay?

College Essays
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<p>Upenn's first prompt," A Penn education provides a liberal arts and sciences foundation across multiple disciplines with a practical emphasis in one of four undergraduate schools: the College of Arts and Sciences, the School of Engineering and Applied Science, the School of Nursing, or the Wharton School.</p>

<p>Given the undergraduate school to which you are applying, please discuss how you will engage academically at Penn." (in less than 300 words)</p>

<p>is the only supplement I have left. After this I will be done with my college apps :')
So I am looking for anyone who would be willing to read my essay and give me some opinions?
Please and Thank you!</p>

<p>I am totally willing to give my two cents to anyone who would like me to also!</p>

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<p>pm it to me and I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>@rymugsy
sent! thanks so much!</p>

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<p>I’ll be glad to read it. I know Penn well!</p>

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<p>@goothebear
Sent! (I think I did?)
Tell me if you didn’t get it.
Thank you so much!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it too! Would you be willing to give some feedback on a short 200 word essay?</p>