<p>I've been revising my essay for UC prompt 1 over and over. I have two versions which are pretty similar but my latest one is really trying to beat my theme in. I would like for people to read both my latest and earlier draft to see whether my latest draft answers and solves more questions/problems, or whether it is also just as bad. :'( please help?</p>
<p>I''l read it, pm it over</p>
<p>I would love to read what you wrote...</p>
<p>pm it over</p>
<p>bump please!! I would really really really appreciate for someone to simply compare the two and say whether version B improves the first draft at all..</p>
<p>I'll give my 2cents</p>
<p>I'll read it</p>
<p>i've sent it to all of you... i've only gotten a few replies back. anyone else, please help!</p>
<p>Ill read it for you, PM me.</p>
<p>PM it to me PLZ,... I will be a harsh critic</p>
<p>i can read it if u'd like!@</p>
<p>I can read it and edit :)</p>