<p>Clavy, was hoping. Each is a singular pronoun.</p>
<p>I said reality entertainment is only beneficial if it has a just purpose or goal. I used cake boss as a personal example- informational and it inspired me to “want to be a baker in the future”. Americas next top model because it shows that through hard work and effort you can achieve your dream/goal. And shows like jeopardy is harmful because they provide misleading information that money can be achieved through th
E “easy way out”</p>
<p>^sorry but thats sort of what youre not supposed to do. i think you straddled the fence there.</p>
<p>Hannah-I didn’t even mention reality television. I wrote about the Truman Show and the Scarlet Letter to show the harm that reality entertainment causes.</p>
<p>possibly the worst essay i’ve written in my entire life.
reality television shows are beneficial because we learn lessons from the lives of others:
- biggest loser/ i used to be fat- motivate healthy/active living, controlled proportions, obesity rates in america, etc.
- american idol- aspire for greater things
blehhhhh :(</p>
<p>For those of you that had a writing experimental, was the real one section 2 or section 7??
Because I remember doing better on section 2…</p>
<p>anyone freakn remember the transition between paragraph 2 and 3? i found that difficult…i put the one with …blah blah personal experience???gahhhhh and i seriously think that its a parallelism error for the plants… 1 No error for the lawrence…it sounds awkward but it is indeed correct.</p>
<p>NspiredOne, not sure if we’re talking about the same one, but I remember putting something along the lines of “another option is to find a manufacturer with an extended warranty” so he can repair your car whenever you need it.</p>
<p>do you guys think i got a 10+ if i did the following:</p>
<p>filled up ALL the lines</p>
<p>4 paragraphs (intro, 2 body, conc)</p>
<p>used one super detailed example/story that demonstrates how photography provides a straightforward representation of life</p>
<p>?</p>
<p>i’m worried because i only used one example…</p>
<p>littlepenguin-I thought the transition was that “no matter how much research you do, a rental will have is problems”?</p>
<p>aaannie, that’s what i got as well.</p>
<p>Hey, did u get A (leave just as is) for number 11, part of the first grammar section?</p>
<p>…who the hell is going to remember that</p>
<p>Wasn’t there an error in paralellism with the organic plants?</p>
<p>^ LOL
yeah no can do. </p>
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<p>What did you guys get for section 5 number 14. I think I had B.</p>
<p>QUESTION:
Did anyone else get the writing identifying errors question about downloading pictures and it being illegal because of copyright infringement? Or was that experimental?</p>
<p>greedisgood: let me repeat myself, nobody is going to remember that.</p>
<p>chloee: I’m pretty sure that’ experimental. I didn’t have that.</p>
<p>@GreedIsGood, I hope that’s facetiousness</p>
<p>Did you get </p>
<p>A
B
E
C
B</p>
<p>Or something like that in the middle?</p>