5 People to read my commonapp? eternally grateful!

<p>I would like 5 people to read my commonapp.
I will PM or email it to you (whichever you wish)
and I have a few specific concerns that I'd like for you to address
or you can just give me any critique in general!</p>

<p>I don't want anyone to edit my essay if all you are going to say is
"this is good"
or "this is bad"</p>

<p>I'd like advice that I can take and use to make my essay better.</p>

<p>Thank you so much in advance!</p>

<p>Oh and my topic is about how I tell jokes.</p>

<p>Please leave a post and I will PM you :)</p>

<p>pm me :slight_smile:
10 char</p>

<p>PM me!
1234567890</p>

<p>bump10char!</p>

<p>bumpbumbpbubmp</p>

<p>Sounds interesting. I’ll bite. Send it over.
As always, the boilerplate disclaimer:
And as a note, in case you were wondering my credentials (or lack thereof), I’m currently a freshman at Johns Hopkins University. Other schools I was accepted to were University of Chicago and Cornell. In other words, I’m far from the best reader, but I’ll do my best.</p>

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<p>bump! i still need 3 readers =/</p>

<p>pm me the essay!</p>

<p>I’ll read yay</p>

<p>Sent from my SPH-M820-BST using CC App</p>

<p>send me the essay…I’ll be critical and fair</p>

<p>Sure I will be honest with it if you like…and plus I have nothing else better to do. PMme</p>