About to submit my application to FSU, CRITIQUE my ESSAY!!!

<p>Reply or send me a message if you'd like to read it</p>

<p>I'll PM you the essay immediately </p>

<p>I need final revisions before I submit it!</p>

<p>Thank you</p>

<p>Come on please…</p>

<p>I have read only around 3 essays so far. Im pretty good grammar-wise. I could definitely point out flaws in the content and whether what you wrote moved/impressed me or not.</p>

<p>If you are interested, pm me.</p>