<p>I'm not worried about word count or anything. Of course, if you think that I can cut it down to make it better then feel free to give a suggestion. But generally I am concerned about the overall content, flow and whether this style would work. It's an "important items" essay. I would really appreciate it if someone can give some feedback/opinion/criticism/etc. I don't mind harsh ones, really. </p>
<p>Tell me if you want to give it a read and I'd PM you the essay. Oh and if you want me to give an opinion for your essay, just PM me. It'd be a simple quid pro quo thing :)</p>