any ED acceptee want to help out an ED rejectee

Colleges and Universities A-Z Cornell University
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<p>I figure the main probably i'm rejected by Cornell is because my essay is ****. </p>

<p>So today, i wrote a new one. Can anyone read and give me some feedback as to which part is redundant and which part is to be expanded on. </p>

<p>Please</p>

<p>Shuai</p>

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<p>ill give feedback. i advised one cc applicant on his essay (he just sent it to me and i wrote honest comments…no rewriting on my part at all) and he got accepted.</p>