Anyone bored enough to read my essay?

<p>Yep, its the common app essay. I need someone to read it and critique it or give advice. Please, no class of 09'ers</p>

<p>Thanks so much.</p>

<p>sure, I'm 2010 class, so I can help you out a bit. </p>

<p>:D</p>

<p>I'll be happy to read it</p>

<p>sure i'll read it.</p>

<p>i'll read it</p>

<p>i'll be happy to help.</p>