anyone for 8th edition of my essay?(perferable not applying this year)

College Essays
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<p>I had revised seven times already and still felt quite dissatisfied, is anyone interested in helping me revise the essay and criticizing it?</p>

<p>BTW, i also just finished my LAFAYETTY supplementary essay, is anyone interested?<br>
Please tell me which one you are interested in and I will send it over.</p>

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<p>i'll read your 8th edition one, i'm '09 but you can see my posts, i help a lot.</p>

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<p>sent'' :P...</p>

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<p>email: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a></p>

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<p>sent.........</p>

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<p>bump bump''</p>

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<p>Up up bump...</p>

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<p>a critique plz. i seriously need some advices!</p>

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<p>....bump again..... frustrated,,,</p>

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<p>send it over to my PM</p>