Anyone want to critique my common app essay?

I really need some help writing my essay. I chose prompt #4, about the problem I’d like to solve, and I’m afraid that the topic i picked is too “out of the box,” and I’m not sure myself what it reveals about me. My life is literally so uneventful. Can someone give me some feedback and tell me whether i should stick to the essay i have now, or just start an essay from scratch? I can message you
Thanks

i can if you want

yeah! pm me

I can read it!

Sure