Anyone willing to critique my personal statements? Please.

<p>The title says it. I would really appreciated it.
Only current NYU students and EDers please (I'll investigate; I'm just not comfortable with sending it to RDers, nothing personal).
Just let me know and I'll PM it over. Thanks!</p>

<p>bump! 10char</p>

<p>The thing is, once youre in, or have applied on Early Decision, you stop checking back on collegeconfidential. So either youre stuck with “RDers” like us. Or you get one or two MAX people to read it. Which does not give you MUCH scope on how your statement is. So please. Investigate away. Lets see where it takes you. Not being rude or taunting or anything. Just said what i see.</p>

<p>I got plenty of responses on the “College Essay” page. Most are NYU-disinterested RDers though. So you’re right about that.</p>

<p>I’ll say this: I"ll let RDers critique my supplements if they send me theirs first. Of course, I will critique them. It’s a win-win situation.</p>