BANANAS! help critique/shorten my essay please~

College Essays
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<p>I am looking for critiques on my common app essay. Also, it's currently 651 words and I'd like to bring it closer to 550. Right now it touches on multiple themes, and I'm trying to tighten it, but I don't know what to put on the chopping block. Your help would be greatly appreciated. :)</p>

<p>If you like bananas, I promise that it'll be a fun read! I'll PM it over- Thank you in advance!</p>

<p>** My conscience says no 2015ers. Sorry!</p>

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<p>Can I read it?</p>

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<p>I’ll read and give harsh, honest critiques. Just pm it over if you can’t find any non-2015ers</p>

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<p>I can take a read and give you some feedback.</p>

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<p>i’ll read and critique, if you’d like</p>

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<p>PMed over. Thank you so much for your help!</p>

<p>Anyone else interested? A banana a day keeps the doctor away :]</p>