Pick one:
[aB][asize=4][acolor=#008000]Decision: Accepted[/color][/size]**
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): Did not submit
ACT (breakdown): 30 Composite, 24 M 33 R 32 E 29 S
SAT II: Did not take
Unweighted GPA: 4.0
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): 10/133
AP (place score in parenthesis): World (5) US (4) Lang (4) Physics 1 (3) Taking Lit, Bio, Euro and Gov this year as well. Multiple “Honors Courses”
IB (place score in parenthesis):
Senior Year Course Load: Taking AP Lit, AP Bio, AP Euro, AP Gov, Elementary Calculus, Spanish V and Band
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): Marine Corps Award, Society of the Mayflower, couple other little ones, awarded for best scores in grade on multiple NYS Regents ( Perhaps not major)
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): Lots. Key Club, Class Treasurer twice, Student council VP, Science Club, NHS, Varsity Soccer and Tennis (captained), FBLA,
Job/Work Experience: Two internships, one competitive with then 300 hours at a Zoo ( first HS student to get it), other noncompetitive at local veterinarians. Work part time seasonally as well.
Volunteer/Community service: NHS, money raises for numerous community causes through Student Council as well
Summer Activities: Interning, Working
Essays: Common app was solid, talked about interning at Zoo.Why Bates was lackluster (oops)
Teacher Recommendation: Pretty good, I was happy with them
Counselor Rec: Did not see, and my counselor is the least helpful guy you’ll ever meet so I’ll assume mediocre
Additional Rec: From Vet at Zoo, Friggen fantastic
Short Answer Questions: Lackluster (see above)
Interview: Did interview, nailed that sucker. Although the interviewer called me by the wrong name, funny story. I didn’t want to correct him, so I emailed him afterwards. He was very apologetic.
Other:
Applied for Financial Aid?: Yup
Intended Major: Dual Bio/History
State (if domestic applicant):NY
Country (if international applicant):
School Type: Small rural public
Ethnicity: White
Gender: Male
Income Bracket: Around 100k combined for this years FAFSA, will shoot down to 0K for next year though due to parents leaving jobs to start small business
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): Low-ish income? I got fee waivers? Rural area? None really.
Reflection:
Strengths: Great internship experience, really a good recommendation from the Vet I interned for, very heavy course load, especially senior year, combined with a good GPA ( 4.0 UW ). Also very extracurricularly involved and showed interest in Bates, good interview.
What you tried to focus on in your application - any hooks you tried to make for yourself: My experiences finding a field I enjoyed and thriving in it.
Weaknesses: Lower ACT, no hooks,
Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected: See strengths
Where else were you accepted/deferred/rejected: Accepted Denison, St. Lawrence, Ithaca, Geneseo, wait listed at Dickinson (???), waiting to hear back from Bucknell and Cornell CALS still. I wish I had applied to Carnegie Mellon as well, sighhhh.