Best story I've written! Read it? I'll read yours too!!!

College Essays
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<p>Its about my relationship with my best friend. As a word of caution, it does discuss rape and sex, so if you're really, really, squeamish I wouldn't recommend it. (Its PG, PG-13 at worst, so its definitely college appropriate) </p>

<p>Be nasty with your comments! I really want to make it even better, no nitpick at everything. </p>

<p>Also, if you could tell me which prompt it suits best that would be great. I'm stuck between
"Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you, and describe that influence." and "Other". My friend's influence on me is implied, and I don't want the adcoms to think I'm off-topic. </p>

<p>If you read my essay I'd like to read yours too! I'll try to give you a thorough critique, so feel free to send them over :)</p>

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<p>I’d love to read it, sounds different…</p>

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<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you could read mine too!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it :D</p>

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<p>I’ll read it, I’ll send you mine as well but it’s a little bit long</p>

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<p>pm it over :D</p>

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<p>PM ill def read it for you )</p>

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<p>PM me. I’ll gladly give you tips on how to improve.</p>

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<p>PM me, I’ll be happy to read it</p>

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<p>PM me ! i’ll read it (:</p>

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<p>I’ll read it for you :)</p>

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<p>sounds unique, but not sure if it’s acceptable to the adcom though… pm me and i’ll send you my essay</p>