**Decision: Deferred **
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): n/a
ACT (breakdown): 35, (36 English, 33 math, 34 reading, 35 science)
SAT II: 780 Math2, 730 Chemistry
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): school only does weighted out of 100, so I am 103.96 / 100
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): n/a
AP (place score in parenthesis): EnglishLang (5), Macroecon (5), Microecon (5), USGov (5), HumanGeo (4), USHist (4)
IB (place score in parenthesis): IB English A Literature HL (n/a), IB Spanish B SL (n/a), IB History of the Americas HL (n/a), IB Chemistry HL (n/a), IB Mathematics HL (n/a), IB Economics HL (n/a); (taking all in May 2019)
Senior Year Course Load: IB English A Literature HL, IB Spanish B SL, IB History of the Americas HL, IB Chemistry HL, IB Mathematics HL, IB Economics HL, Theory of Knowledge
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): n/a
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): Competitive Jump Roper (9x grand national champ, 1x world champ), Student Council (secretary, vice president, president, past-president), Theatre (Lead roles: Cat in the Hat in Seussical, Wolf in Into the Woods), Mu Alpha Theta (secretary), National Honor Society, Track (2x state runner-up for 300m hurdles), Cross Country (3-time state team champs, 3rd place individual sophomore year)
Job/Work Experience: KD College Prep Student Assistant, Ford Commercial Actor, Jump Rope Instructor in Sweden
Volunteer/Community service: Young Men’s Service League (leadership chairman, secretary, meetings coordinator), Community Storehouse Junior Board
Summer Activities: USA Jump Rope Nationals (2011-2018), World Jump Rope Championships (2013-2014, 2017-2018), International Rope Skipping Championships (2014 in Hong Kong, 2016 in Sweden), Economics for Leaders @ Brown University
Essays (rating 1-10, details): 8, they were good and obviously I made the super personal to my interests in jump rope, economics, political science, etc.
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details): 8.5, one I know was great, but the other may have been lackluster, and school counselor’s was probably great
Teacher Rec #1: 9, from my IB Economics teacher; he loves me and I have continually excelled in his class as a top student, and I got super close to him during junior year, as he also was my advisor for my 4000-word Extended Essay (min-thesis) for IB
Teacher Rec #2: 7, from my IB History of the Americas teacher; he also loves me, but I did not excel in his class like I would have liked to in junior year (ended both semesters with 91s), but I still think he would’ve touched on the contributions I have made to class discussions and such
Counselor Rec: 9, from my only school counselor; I went on two college visit trips with him, so I also got super close to him, and I have no doubt in my mind that he would have written a superb letter of recommendation
Additional Rec: n/a
Interview: 8.5, went super well, as my interviewer had only graduated two years ago, so we really connected in that sense; she was also from Texas (like myself), so we clicked on how moving to RI would have been a great change; thought I would be a great fit for Brown!
Other
Applied for Financial Aid?: yes
Intended Major: Economics and Political Science
State (if domestic applicant): Texas
Country (if international applicant): USA
School Type: Public charter
Ethnicity: White
Gender: Male
Income Bracket: $100-125k
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): n/a
Reflection
Strengths: I think my ECs and test scores would have been great strengths for me, especially considering how much time I spent on ECs like my jump roping (which I included a video of), and test scores were in 75th percentile
Weaknesses: Perhaps my grades, second letter of rec, and no major internships; grades dipped a little bit in 11th grade, so that may have been a small red flag; second letter of rec probably made them question; no major internships to show my interest in econ or polisci, whereas plenty of kids have something like that, probably put me in the deferred category
Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected: Explained a little bit above, but in due part to my weaknesses
Where else were you accepted/deferred/rejected: Maybe my essays could have been better?
General Comments:
I will be honest: I was a little shocked to see I got deferred. I thought I was going to get in, especially because I applied ED. I thought that I kind of fit the mold for what Brown was looking for in a student (well-rounded, interested in a lot). However, I now realized that this college admissions thing is a giant game, and perhaps I could have played it better along the way in HS. We will see how RD decisions come back, I guess.