Can anyone please tell me how is this essay i wrote recently ? how much points could I receive ?

<p>assignment question : does progress depend on people with new ideas rather than on people whose ideas are based on the current way of thinking ?</p>

<p>My essay :</p>

<p>Replication ,maybe useful in science and technology of stem calls ,antibiotics , is not a sign of any progression in one's self or life or behavior .progress ,in general, depends on innovation and creativity . To invent is to create something unprecedented , unseen before. Moving with the current way of thinking of the majority is one way people think as a facile way to progress ,in fact , this is not called progression. this notion can be proved through examples I observed by my naked eyes. </p>

<p>building a helicopter from simple and inexpensive materials was one dream of a poor , limited-financially guy called Ahmed. Despite helicopter"s popularity and banalness worldwide , Ahmed's invention was respected because of his creativity in building his own's . his progress was evolving much more whenever somebody knew how he invented it . his invention was made up of used metal canes , wires, recycled nails & lead . complicated as it looks , the invention was indeed a very hard one ,and a new one ,simultaneously .</p>

<p>using imitation as a way of progression with a little differentiation is a misguided method ,I believe . Once in my biology class , we were asked to model a human DNA . having many ideas in our head ,Lucinda and I started working unlike everybody else who just paused ,astonished m having no idea what to do . while working one cam and asked me : " Wow. it seems like you're going to do something innovative . How are You going to do it ? " I replied : "by using clay and plastic paper ." although i knew her conviction and that her group will try to imitate us , i still told her actually. having submitted our projects by the end of the week , the teacher appreciated ours and ignored theirs for ours was a new idea not just an imitation of someone's .</p>

<p>In conclusion , I virtue to say that people with new ideas are the real progressives , inventors, and this is the right way for people to go through ,not to just progress depending on the ideas of the others.</p>