Accepted:
-College of William & Mary (will be attending)
-University of Southern California (spring admission)
-University of California, Los Angeles
-University of Virginia
-George Mason University (Honors College)
Waitlisted:
-University of Pennsylvania (later rejected)
-University of California, Berkeley (did not accept place on waitlist)
-New York University (did not accept place on waitlist)
Rejected:
-Stanford University
I also applied to George Washington University, but they lost my transcript and never considered my application. I called them multiple times well before the submission deadline, but they never bothered to respond. Lol.
Major:
-Anthropology (first choice)
-Human Biology (second choice, where available)
-Biology (third choice, where available)
I also indicated interest in the pre-medical track where available
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 1420 (760 reading/writing, 660 math); single sitting
ACT (breakdown): 31 (36E, 30M, 32R, 27S); single sitting
SAT II (place score in parentheses): Literature (710), Spanish w/o listening (570)
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.98
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): 1
AP (place score in parentheses): in rough chronological order: World History (2), U.S. Government (4), Psychology (5), BC Calculus (1; AB subscore of 1 lol), U.S. History (4), English Language (5), English Literature (TBA), Biology (TBA)
IB (place score in parentheses): Spanish B SL (6), Anthropology SL (5)
Senior Year Course Load: IB English Literature HL, IB History of the Americas HL, IB Biology HL, IB Anthropology HL, IB Math Studies, IB Film SL, TOK (semester 1), Honors Debate (semester 2 - retaking at my teacher’s request so I can assist the newcomers)
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): these aren’t super major but:
-AP Scholar with Honor
-Quarterfinalist at VHSL Debate Championships
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parentheses):
-Debate (Captain)
-Sociedad Honoraria Hispánica (Vice President)
-Key Club (Social Media Manager - I run an Instagram page, lol)
-National Honor Society
-Mu Alpha Theta
-Girl Up
Job/Work Experience: N/A
Volunteer/Community Service:
-Organized a small fundraiser for local SPCA
-Junior volunteer program at local hospital
-Regular volunteer position as an exhibit interpreter at a local “science museum”… can’t be too specific here without losing my anonymity lol
-Lots of little things (blood drives, feeding-the-homeless-type events, etc.)
Summer Activities:
-VA Summer Residential Governor’s School for the Humanities
-EF Tour of Ecuador - made for a really cool essay that probably helped me get into UCLA lol
Essays (rating 1-10, details): Ehh, not going to give my essays numerical ratings, sorry. I worked very hard on all of them. Most were pretty “quirky” and a couple dealt with the kinds of “serious” topics people usually advise against writing about, but I made sure to tie them back into myself and my growth as a person. My Common App essay was about Governor’s School and how it helped me, you guessed it, grow as a person. My “why ___” essays were also pretty good, I think (I think my Why Penn essay is what got me waitlisted instead of rejected); my advice for those is to do your research and mention specific things about the college that the average Joe wouldn’t know so that adcoms know you’re interested… I think that the fact that I didn’t really do this for NYU might be why I got waitlisted instead of accepted, lol, so.
Teacher Recommendations (rating 1-10, details): Didn’t read, but I have very good relationships with all of my recommenders, so I’m assuming they were pretty good!
Counselor Rec (rating 1-10, details): see above
Additional Rec (rating 1-10, details): N/A
Interview: Stanford one was pretty ehh, Penn one was really good. A lot depends on your interviewer. Luckily, interviews don’t matter a whole lot in the grand scheme of things.
Other
Applied for Financial Aid? Oho u bet ur buns I did
State (if domestic applicant): VA
School Type: Public (federally designated “low-income” public that qualifies for Title I, more specifically)
Ethnicity: White
Gender: Female
Income Bracket: ~$40k now, but in 2015 my mom only made ~$19k so that’s what colleges saw
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): I’m kinda poor lol? I would have been considered first gen until 2014, which is when my mom got her degree… so that would’ve been a boost, but hey, my mom has a degree (and crippling debt) now!
Reflection
Strengths: Essays (except the Why NYU essay lol), recommendations, Penn interview, GPA, rank
Weaknesses: TEST SCORES and lack of super major awards and super cool extracurriculars
Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected: I mean, see above lol
General Comments/Advice/Hindsight: I was very close to choosing USC, one of my dream schools, over W&M, the school that gave me a full ride. Think very carefully when making this decision. Is your dream school worth the amount of debt it requires? If you find yourself ultimately leaning toward your dream school because you’re worried about other people’s opinions, please reconsider. I’m not in college yet, but I’m pretty sure you won’t care about those people’s opinions once you actually get to college. Also, please don’t pull a me and stress constantly over your applications once they’re submitted. What’s done is done. You are lovely and you will find your home. Good luck!