can somebody please help me with my essay?

<p>i have already written my college essay and would like someone to edit it or at least point out the mistakes or suggest some improvements.
please PM me and tell me.I shall PM you the essay.</p>

<p>can we have a forum for essay discussion? (or a sub forum?)</p>

<p>it appears you are in a good university(rice).why dont you read my essay?i`ll pm it to you.</p>

<p>ok.. do so. Ill try to get it back As soon as I can</p>

<p>PM me; i will take a look....</p>

<p>any body else ..please help..its urgent</p>

<p>I'll read it, but I'm about to leave to go babysit so I won't be able to respond until about 6 (2 hours) if that's ok.</p>