Hi! This is an essay of my little brother. Can you grade it (1-6)?
Many problems in our life depend on society, so we can’t solve it individually. That is the reason of
existence of a government. Deputies working there analyse the problem and give us a solution. Since
a government was established in every country, people started fully rely on them. After all no one
can make such changes as increasing tax, facilities, law individually.
In my opinion it is completely unacceptable to leave problems that depend on our life to other
people. Besides, the governments work is not always giving us positive results. Take a look at
situation in France. The government increased tax and it is nearly 3 times much than 3 years ago.
Evidently this case is associated with difficult political situation there, however it is surely not
optimal decision. Or in USA the problem of racism couldn’t be solved many years, until the great
individuals like Lincoln and Martin Luther didn’t appear on public. Sometimes the government just
ignores situation, which could be critical for some people and this is happening in many countries.
However, what can be done with an effort of individual? We can’t create more jobs or make roads
safer or improve the schools or help to provide any of the other benefits that we have come to
enjoy. But surely there are some activities that anybody could do and could be contribution for
future of nation. First it is to protest against wrong decision of government. The government is
powerful unless people believe them. If large group of people protest against government, they will
listen to us. But there were many occasion in history, when riot destroyed the country, so it is
significant make a decision in a right situation. Next thing that individual can do for society’s sake is
to help government with new ideas. There no need to be against government if it is not necessary,
so people can help them with some new projects.
To sum up, people should take more responsibility for solving problems that effect on community.
After all it is the problems which depend on our life. For our own sake we should be more active in
these things, we should not allow to government take decision against our favour, all the same time
help them to find solution, which will satisfy everyone.