Can someone please help change this sentence?

College Essays
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<p>"As I look into the mirror, I see someone who will help thousands of children through a strong undergraduate education in Neuroscience, which would lead to medical school, culminating in a medical degree."</p>

<p>I can't figure out how to say that after getting a strong undegraduate education in Neuroscience, I would go to medical school ending with a MD.</p>

<p>Thanks for your help.</p>

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<p>"As I look in the mirror, I see someone who will major in neuroscience, attend medical school and help thousands of children through the practice of medicine."</p>

<p>Keep your sentences simple.</p>

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<p>Awesome!</p>

<p>Thanks a lot Chedva!</p>