Help with an awkward phrase in my why Duke essay?

<p>"Throughout high school I have genuinely sunk my teeth into my work, allowing myself to take on challenges that I was not always sure I could accomplish."</p>

<p>This sounds somewhat awkward and may be grammatically incorrect. Any help would be greatly appreciated.</p>

<p>Throughout high school I have strived to immerse myself in my work, facing and overcoming numerous challenges.</p>

<p>Try, “Throughout high school, I have genuinely sunk my teeth into my work, challenging myself with tasks in which a favorable outcome was not assured.”</p>

<p>Probs too cheesy, but whatever:</p>

<p>“Throughout high school, I have consistently tested my own limits, taking on numerous risks in my work. I wasn’t always sure that I would succeed, but I did know this: I would do my best.”</p>

<p>I like biner’s :)</p>

<p>lol good thing I’m going into something that’s not creative writing :D</p>

<p>biner congrats! I chose yours</p>

<p>Haha, I’m honored. Glad I could help out.</p>