Can someone proofread my BU supplement? Submitting tonight

<p>In no more than 250 words, please tell us why BU is a good fit for you and what specifically has led you to apply for admission?</p>

<p>I am dreamer in every sense of the word. I long to explore, to create, to question, to write, and to think critically. I have countless interests. I am curious about different cultures. And I have goals that some say are too big to accomplish. </p>

<p>This is the very reason why I’m drawn to Boston University. BU represents all that I want. Its academic reputation satisfies my thirst for knowledge. And its diversity allows me to collaborate with students from various backgrounds.</p>

<p>I am not looking for the quintessential college experience. I want to tour historical buildings where political figures once stood. I want to find places in the city that I can call my favorite spots. I want to stand in awe of masterpieces in museums. I want gain hands-on experience in political science.</p>

<p>There is no better city to study politics then Boston. As one of the oldest cities in United States, Boston is the mecca of political history. At BU, I will be able to study the American Revolution in the very city it occurred in. I will be able to study mandarin in the classroom then use it in Chinatown or study abroad in Shanghai. </p>

<p>After a BU college visit, I was reassured Boston would be the best college experience for me. I believe Boston University is an environment where I can freely exercise my creativity and contribute my ideas as I also learn from other dreamers like me from around the country and beyond.</p>

<p>3rd paragraph, you could say “I am looking for the quintessential college experience”. Your experience is just as quintessential as any other, only a bit more mature! In the same paragraph, I want <em>to</em> gain hands-on experience.</p>

<p>4th paragraph, “There is no better city to study politics <em>than</em> Boston”. “I will be able to study the American Revolution in the very city <em>in which it occured</em>”. “I will be able to study <em>M</em>andarin in the classroom <em>, and</em> then use it…”.</p>

<p>5th paragraph, "I was reassured <em>that</em> Boston would be the best college experience for me.</p>

<p>I really like this!! Just a few grammatical corrections and you’re set :slight_smile: Good luck!</p>