can someone read my common app essay?

College Essays
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<p>it's not completely polished but pretty pretty please? i'm worried it has too much storytelling, but i need another opinion. oh and it's 562 words....is that gonna be a problem?</p>

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<p>PM me. They don’t mind if it’s over by a little. But I’m sure you could cut it down by 62 words after a few more revisions. I will be happy to read it and provide some feedback.</p>

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<p>I’d be glad to give it a read. I’ll try to revise it a little/ give you some feedback.</p>

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<p>ill read it!</p>

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<p>I’ll look over it.</p>

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<p>thanks guys just PMed all of you</p>

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<p>I will read and edit and give feed back</p>

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