Can someone read my why chicago essay?

<p>Hi, I just wrote my why chicago essay. However, I took a different approach. Rather than talking about what I like about UChicago. I started with a conversation with a UChicago student and then morphed it into why I want to go to Chicago. Some people read it and said its not Chicago specific enough because I can simply change the name to other schools and make it still work. </p>

<p>however, I think its pretty chicago specific. So can I get the opinion of some chicago student?</p>

<p>THank you very much.</p>

<p>No response? Anyone willing to help?</p>

<p>They are having a mid-term.</p>

<p>Correction: we are studying for our midterms.</p>

<p>Honestly, though, that sounds specific enough to me.</p>

<p>oh sorry. </p>

<p>Well, I said I like chicago because it is a place that will help me achieve my dreams and aspirations and then talked about how I like the Houses system. But that’s all I did and it was the last paragraph after the whole conversation with the UChicago student about dreams.</p>

<p>i’ll read!</p>