Before I start with my details, please, please brutally chance me. Don’t just say (you can or can’t), just fully honestly give me your opinion.
and a clarification about my situation, I am on a h4 visa( i moved to the US when I was 2 years old, but I am not a permanent resident yet so I will be classified in the international pool) Here is the thing- we applied for permanent residency like a few months ago and will probably get it RIGHT AFTER college apps(like in feb/ march of senior year…) as you are looking at my profile, can you also give your opinion on the value of taking a gap year?
basic demographics- female, citizenship= Indian, Public school(one of the best in state)… I don’t have any hooks, unless being from Idaho(a rather underrepresented state) a hook?
Finances- EFC= 20k.
Intended major- for lac’s, Ivy leagues I will be applying as a “history of science” or “science, tech, society” major (or some variation of these majors)
-Oh and I wanted to mention, I got into Reed’s fly in program, and I know that generally if you get into a fly in you are guaranteed an acceptance to that school, but since I am an intl I am not so sure?
My college list-
state flagship(acceptance rate 70 plus)- my only safety school
All Ivy leagues
Claremont colleges
Reed, wellesley, WASP(top lac’s)
NYU, notre dame, chicago, tulane, NU, NEU
UC’s, Umich, UT’s- I know I won’t get any aid at UC’s, but my parents still want me to apply to see if I can get in
Yes, I know this is a lot of colleges but I can handle shotgunning(I shotgunned to 20 plus summer programs this junior year) and it will be the best as a I am an intl who needs (partial) aid.
This is because my Ec’s are evenly split between humanities and sciences, I will further explain in the following Ec section
Stats- test scores and GPA- I have a 4.0/ 4.0( no rank, my school does not rank or do weighted GPA) however I have a rigorous schedule(taking IB math HL, IB chem HL, IB phy HL, IB bio HL, ib history HL, ib english sl, IB german SL)…
I took the english, APUSH exams this year
My coursework from freshman and sophomore years- CALC BC(5), bio(5), chem(4), phy C(4 on both), US gov(5), human geo(5)
note- will these 4’s hurt me? I self studied both physics C because school does not offer them, but I did take the ap chem class(ngl, chem isn’t my favorite lol)
SAT, ACT = 1540, ACT=35
EC’s:
BWSI summer program @ MIT- I am doing the Cogworks class- one of 20 students selected nationwide to participate in the program
Virtual research program @ Columbia university this summer
Paid intern @ my state’s biggest natural history museum(a pretty big deal, kinda competitive one of 16 interns)
Enjoy writing science fiction, was featured in some national exhibit thing
-my writing is also featured on the LA times, through the HS Insider program-I write science features+ relevance to public, etc
Taken 2 math classes at my state flagship university(calc 3, number theory) and mainatined 4.0 gpa
One of 200 students worldwide participating in QSYS(quantum school for young students) program to learn about computing and quantum stuff
Kenyon young writers online workshop (on a full scholarship)- it is about science writing and the intersection of science and humanities.
I was one of 20 girls selected nationwide as an engineer girl ambassador for my initiative to teach middle schoolers bioengineering this 2022-23 year + got funding for it
-bunch of regional speech awards, a few state awards(I do oratory, talking about technology and science+ impact on society)
I am a website designer for many clubs at school- science club, stduent govt- I have been part of student govt(IB branch) for 3 years, science club officer for 2 years- have nearly double number of members+ will lead USABO sessions this fall, tutoring and stuff… I have done a bunch of fundraisers/ donation drives in my school… am part of like 3-4 clubs(with officer positions- student govt, math club, science club, speech/ debate)
AWARDS:(kinda weak here, I know)
-USABO semifinalist- 10 percent nationwide(Ok, so I was really prepping hard this year, and was expecting to make it to camp because of over 3 years of prep, but I wasn’t allowed to take the semifinals exam because I am not a citizen/ resident and they require it… it was really sad because I have never thought of myself as anything but american, and maybe plan to write my college essay about this? does that sound good?)
British biology olympiad( got top 10 percent worldwide)
-Science olympiads- 10th place @ invitational, numerous top 3 mentions at state(even one first place) and state brain bee 3 place
-National history day- one of top 2 in entire state to be selected for nationals… They only have like 100 students worldwide that qualify for nationals… I wrote a history paper about a scienctific thing + paper got a special award for best “science tech” project in the state from over 600 entries
-Research- so I have done some bioinformatics research (genomics) and got 3rd place at state in the CS/ comp bio category… I did the entire thing myself(like no mentors and help, from the idea to the actual research)- this research also won a special award from the Navy, called the naval science award
LORS/ essays:
My science teacher has a statement in his lor, “strongest student in my decade of teaching” and my german teacher’s rec is pretty strong too…
Essays= let’s say around 6/10