Title. My reason for transferring is fairly compelling. Although I do have several social reasons for transferring, I opted to not include those elements and remain entirely academic and curriculum based. As you might have noted, 4 of the 6 schools I applied to have an open curriculum – this is something I’ve come to highly value. I’m currently attending ASU.
Major: Global Studies (really it’s International Relations, but…)
College GPA: 3.9
Major GPA: 4.0
HS GPA: 3.64 (3.61 UW)
ACT: 31
For my extracurriculars, I used the space I had available to write mini-essays that serve as vignettes into my personality/outlook a bit more. For example, I framed me founding a charity club with the urbanization and displacement in my hometown.
EC: Was founder/president of a charity club, Debate team, Department of State Intern, DNC Presidential Candidate Summer Seminars, Part-time for startup, Artist (animation, drawing, and watercolor), Filmmaker, Writer (short stories, novelist, poetry, etc).
Awards: Principal’s List (only including this because it highlights how I improve grade-wise in high school), Dean’s List, NHS, CSF (California Honor’s Society), Eagle Scout, Algebra Student of the Year, English Student of the Year, NSCS.
Recommendations: I’ll be a sophomore transfer, which puts me in a tough spot. I have one professor who can write me a good recommendation, but most of my other classes have been fairly large. I don’t really know what I’m to do – I’m meeting with my adviser in a few days.
I haven’t written all my essays yet, but I’ve finished my main ‘Why I Want to Transfer’ essay. I think it’s fairly solid, I’m a good writer so it’s probably an 8.5ish without too much editing.
Any thoughts? I’m fairly nervous about this whole process because it feels like I’ve compromised academically so much in this year. Hearing my friend talk about how difficult his Yale writing class is really got to me. I’ve had some great professors, but could thoroughly use more rigorous academics. I’m thinking of completing the entire Columbia Core Curriculum’s readings in a summer to prepare for next year. That being said, if I get in nowhere (Ideally Hamilton, NYU Gallatin, Brown, or Wesleyan for the open curriculum), it’d be quite the conundrum.
If anyone recommends other schools, I’d be interested! I’d prefer schools that don’t require two years of foreign language, as that’s the reason I both struggled in high school and missed a 4.0 (B+ in French). I probably intend to go to grad school, so having foreign language classes tank my GPA doesn’t exactly sound ideal…