<p>Anyone want to read the one I just wrote this morning. It is ridiculously raw and fresh, so let me know what you think! Also, if any of you college students are good at cutting words, please help! I need to cut from 611 to fit the 500 word "recommendation" on the common app, which confuses me. Thanks!</p>
<p>ok im just going to keep bumping this until somebody reads it. seriously. its not THAT difficult. you can do it!!!:)</p>
<p>…please? :(</p>
<p>I’m not college-aged but I’ll certainly give it a go if you’d like.</p>
<p>Why don’t you clean it up first? No sense in asking CC tor read a rough draft that you’ll be changing up either way. Raw and fresh isn’t exactly the best stage for review.</p>
<p>Sure, I can try.</p>
<p>Although I am not a college student, I am more than glad to read it for you. (:</p>
<p>thanks Saugus and needstostudy.
@Pancaked I have an issue with not being a good judge of my own writing. It is not disgusting at the moment as far as grammar goes, although the ending is pretty bad. But I do plan to work more on it if people think it is worth working on, since I have no idea if what I did will work in the grand scheme of things. That is all:)</p>
<p>No problem, Jasha. (;</p>
<p>Sure, PM it over :)</p>