College essay help!!!!

Can someone please review my essay for my dream school?? I have proofread this essay countless times already and I constantly stress about it, thinking it will be the main cause for my rejection :(. someone help me plz

Where is the essay?

It’s a bad idea to post the essay onto the forum. I was wondering if anyone would private message me to read it

I would post on the Essay section and be sure not to send it to any students/current seniors. I’m unfortunately not able to help at this time (snowed under with a bunch of other essays to read), but there are some regular, adult readers on the forum who can likely help. I do advise saying in your essay reader post where you are applying and generally what your essay is about. I often decide what to read (when I have time) based on that.

Thanks for the tip proudterrier

I agree. :slight_smile:

You can PM it to me.