Comments on essays

<p>HI THERE~
I've finished two essays on activities. I think the activities themselves are pretty interesting and rare, but I'm not sure whether I have discribed them well.So....I want some voices, better from parents, 2011s or 2010s.</p>

<p>If you would like to have a look at them, reply here and introduce yourself a little bit..</p>

<p>Thanks for helping me!!!!!!!!!!!!</p>

<p>I'd like to take a look.....send it over</p>

<p>I won't send it here...but i will pm someone reliable</p>

<p>ANYONE ELSE?
I really need help...
People around me can't read English
Save me out of despair!!!! Please....</p>

<p>I'm an 08er, but I'd read it if you're willing.</p>

<p>Anyone else??
Parents and elders?</p>

<p>very very rude, xu. no one's going to help a standoffish kid.</p>

<p>go for it.</p>

<p>oh~sorry I didn't mean to be "rude"..
I realized when I said "i won't send it here.."I seemed to be very rude but it was just too late to edit it.(The edit botton just disappeared!)</p>

<p>Ignore that post..
I am sincerely asking for your help~~~~~~~~</p>

<p>my help. sure, send it over. i will be as "reliable" as i can be.</p>

<p>I know what xu means- someone that wouldn't use/borrow ideas from his/her essay. New users with few posts are more likely to do that- Xu's just following College Confidential's advice on the matter.</p>

<p>Hey I sumbitted my essay already to my colleges already. I'd be glad to read it and give you my opinion.</p>