<p>I just finished my rough draft of my common application essay for Stanford. I need some feedback as to what you think about the essay and what kind of picture you get of me after reading it.</p>
<p>Some criterias though:</p>
<p>** No Fellow Stanford Applicants, please! **</p>
<p>** Perferably people of "Member" status or above, though current college students and parents are welcome. **</p>
<p>Thanks guys!</p>
<p>Hey quick,</p>
<p>Not sure how many posts one needs to have to be a "member" status, but I would be willing to read it. I'm not applying to Stanford, only the UC's and USC. </p>
<p>Anyways, if you feel I could help, shoot a PM at me!</p>
<p>yay, my "member status" qualifies me! shoot it over. no worries, not applying to stanford (psshh like i'll get in)</p>
<p>I'll review if you can be patient.</p>
<p>Well... I'm not in member status but i am a college student already
AND, I am glad to read over :) PM me</p>
<p>^Sorry Terese, there's not really anything supporting that you are a college student. Again sorry! :(</p>
<p>Oh yeah, I'm applying EA so I really need some comments as soon as possible. Thanks! :)</p>
<p>PM me. I'll read yours. I am not applying stanford, but UC and USC></p>
<p>PM me !</p>
<p>Haha thanks guys, but anyone else who's not applying to Stanford?</p>
<p>Send it over!</p>
<p>(Oh and I'm definitely not, unless they become need-blind for international :D)</p>
<p>me .</p>
<p>I'll give your essay a looksie.</p>
<p>Guys, please read the words in bold before you post. Thanks!</p>
<p>^You just ignored my last post, lol...</p>
<p>Hey I'm not applying to Stanford and I'd be glad to take a look and offer feedback. Send it over :)</p>
<p>PM it to me.
or email me at: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a><a href="hint:%20i'm%20at%20my%20email%20more%20often">/email</a></p>
<p>not an 09-er.</p>
<p>I never got a reply back from kMz...</p>
<p>PM it to me and i'll critique it.</p>
<p>PM me...i'll be totally honest and brutal ^_^</p>