Common App Essay Help Please

College Essays
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<p>Hi,</p>

<p>I just finished my essay, but I don't think it flows enough. Whenever I read it, it feels like it's too jumpy. Can anyone help me out with transitions?</p>

<p>Common App Prompt:
Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you, and describe that influence.</p>

<p>Any suggestions are appreciated.</p>

<p>Please reply or PM me and I'll send you my essay as soon as possible.</p>

<p>Thanks :)</p>

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<p>I can read/edit. Doing different prompt</p>

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<p>thanks, i pmed you</p>

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<p>I’ll read it; I want to be an editor when I grow up haha. pm me.
(I’m 2010 but my essay is on a different topic plus I’m majoring in writing aka I’m not about to steal someone’s essay)</p>

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<p>Thanks bobdylan</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to help.</p>