Common App Essay

At risk of sounding like an imbecile, what should the Common App essay tell about me? I get that it should attest to things not elsewhere listed in the application, but does that mean my personality or…?

Specifically, I did write a draft already, assuming an intent to showcase a particular character trait of mine.
I used the prompt about childhood to adulthood transition. It is about an event that prompted self-discovery and a mental maturation.

I’m looking for a) feedback if my personal statement is actually relevant to the application and
b) general editing advice

I will start out by saying my essay is heavily anecdotal and I wondered if that was both acceptable and integrated well.

Please comment if you’d like to read my essay for editing, and I will pm you. :slight_smile:

I can read your essay!

I’ll read your essay if you read mine. PM me.

I can read your essay!

I would love to read/help edit your essay!